One week left! I have alot of writing to left to do! Here's the next scene... Please keep in mind, they are still very rough. ;)
INT. VIOLET’S APARTMENT - EARLY EVENING
Violet is standing in the bedroom doorway watching Samson.
Samson is sitting on the bed watching a Western movie.
Sergio is on the living room couch watching a Spanish soap
opera. Violet walks to the dining room and sits down. She
pulls Mr. Perfect’s card from the wall and writes a
description: Dark wavy hair. Blue eyes. A smile that melts
my heart. Athletic but intelligent. A tattoo.
The phone rings.
Hello. Yes, Richard. I know. I
meant to call you. Yes, I know.
(pause) Listen, remember that new
character I’ve been working on?
Well I’m making him the new lead. I
know it’s kind of late but I think
it will make for a better story.
Don’t worry. I will. You’ll have
the first six chapters by morning.
Violet hangs up and sighs. We see transitions of Violet
working through the night. Getting up to check on the guys,
covering them up with blankets when they fall asleep, etc.
Finally we see Violet at her desk, typing the last of her
initial chapters in the morning light. Sergio comes out of
the bedroom and heads to the kitchen.
Up all night, mi corazon?
Yep. Richard needed my first six
chapters by today.
How did Mr. Perfect work out? Or
does he now have a name?
Nope. No name yet. He fit well,
actually. I know this is hard, but
I just can’t be complicating things
any more than I already am.
It’s okay. Don’t worry. We
(walking out of the bedroom,
Mornin’. Anyone ready for some
Listen guys. I have to go out
today. I have a mandatory meeting.
Do you think you can stay out of
I mean it. I need you both to stay
here. In the apartment. I promise
I’ll come home right after my
meeting and we’ll go somewhere. Ok?
Don’t worry little lady. We can
hold down the fort.
And I am going to take a bath.
You want me to make you some
No. No. I’m going to pop into Deja
Brew on my way to the meeting.
You’re sure your okay?
We’ll be fine. I promise. Now get
goin’ before you’re late. And tell
that Markay I said howdy.
(grabs her bag and heads out)
I’ll see you both in a few hours.
Stay quiet, stay out of trouble and
for goodness sakes stay home.
Adios, my amor. And if you can,
bring back more pizza.
Violet laughs and walks out of the door.